Abaddon Torment's Profile

Name: Abaddon Torment
Joining Date: 26 Jul, 2014 01:14 PM
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About Me: Twisted dark demonic homicidal suicidal but instead of doing it why not write it im in a band called whispers of torment i will only post lyrics to one song here but enjoy my poetry:)
Total Submission: 7
Total Comments: 2

Comments

Total 2 Comments
Poem: Waiting
Hmm theres alot of potential here with this one i suggest trying to go for a syllable count. I kinda want to tell you minor changes thatll make it better but then it wouldnt be your work if youd like it ill get back to you when i can but i do like it
Poem: Devils Apocolypse
Hm i like it its very whitty (most likely spelt wrong)