How Easy They Fall....

Thoron

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27 Nov, 2012 12:51 PM

Made a mockery of yet again by my fellow classmates, I smiled to myself they won't be laughing when they are choking on their blood. It was the perfect opportunity, Jason was leaning over the open window, I imagined pushing him out, the terrified scream and the sickening crunching off his bones. They would have to scrape him off the pavement I rushed forward and pushed him before I change my mind.

He screamed in surprise and I heard the thud of his head against concrete, I looked down below splatters of blood stained the concrete red, I turned to my fellow classmates and chuckled "I like the new paint they put on the pavement don't you? it's just how I imagined" everyone was still for a moment before someone let out a shrill scream, everybody rushing for the door people trampled on the way out, I laughed and grabbed the nearest person. He trembled and cried, stupid boy. I twisted his neck and heard the crunch of his bones, I shivered in delight. I punched one of the windows and grabbed some of the shattered glass stained red from my own blood, a girl ran past. I grabbed her by the hair and pulled her back she howled in pain, a huge clump of her blonde hair in my hands. I grabbed her and forced her mouth open she started crying, "open wide" I laughed and pushed the glass inside her mouth, instantly it started filling with blood she gagged and tried to spit it out, I shook my head "no no don't speak with your mouth full" I forced her jaw down the glass piercing the roof of her mouth, I left her to choke on her blood,

I unsheathed my knife and chased the rest down the hallways I tackled a guy running away, sat on top of him and pinned his arms, he started sobbing "please don't do this I'm your friend". I stared at him with vacant eyes and laughed at his pathetic attempt I leaned in close to his face "you always loved laughing at me come on lets see your nice big smile" I raised the knife above my head plunging it down into his neck and ripping sideways, his head slumped to the side a big red grin across his neck a spurt of blood splattered on my face I dabbed at my eyes and grinned. "that's more like it"

I kept walking whistling a tune as I checked the boys toilets, Amanda Crowley was huddled in one of the cubicles she was the one I wanted the most, "Amanda naughty girl you're not supposed to be in here" she huddled back into the furthest corner as I stepped towards her, "back off you freak" my grin turned into a snarl I began to see red I rushed over and yanked her up by the hair... she screamed, I plunged her head into the toilet "if you don't have anything nice to say don't speak at all" she struggled against me trying to pull away, she screamed water pouring into her mouth, I raised her head out and threw her to the side she landed on her back winded, she started coughing and spluttering she vomited out water and started crying hysterically, I crouched down beside her and tucked a lock of her hair behind her ear "it'll all be over soon" she pushed my hand away "please don't kill me have a heart" she said through sobs, I stood up and began howling with laughter I wiped tears from my eyes and sighed, "I don't need a heart I can have yours", I raised the knife and plunged it straight into her stomach and ripped upwards blood spewed everywhere, I could see the pink flesh and intestines below the liters of blood pouring out, she started screaming and howling in absolute agony, I stared at her with no remorse "shut up you stupid girl" I stomped on her windpipe she made a wheezing sound trying to breathe, I sat next to her and put her head on my shoulder I whispered in her ear "we will die together my blood soaking your dying body" I grabbed the knife and tore my throat open I fell to the side slumped on Amanda, she felt the sticky and warm blood coating her face and falling down her body, she tried to scream but she could barely breathe and she coughed up blood, pain shot through her eyes, she made one last attempt at a scream, as she opened her mouth his and her blood combined choked her, she looked up at the lifeless eyes above her she could feel her life seeping away beneath her and then everything went black.

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Tenebricus says:
03 Dec, 2012 01:52 PM

Exellence.... I would like to suggest writing a creepy story I would really be interested in this... Keep up the great job...

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Thoron says:
05 Dec, 2012 11:19 AM

Thank you for the kind words, i will keep that in mind to write a creepy story, any preferences?

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Darkangel101 says:
06 Dec, 2012 02:21 PM

Very Very good. loved the story. good details. so weird. but i couldnt stop laughing everytime someone died! sorry to say that. but otherwords great story. plz continue to write more.

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Thoron says:
07 Dec, 2012 04:50 AM

thanks. it was supposed to be i guess very very, black humour

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BloodBiscuit says:
08 Dec, 2012 02:09 AM

Read this the other day and I enjoyed it start to finish. Its gotta be the right day to write something like this hey? Hahah. Very nice indeed.

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Demon Gothic Yumi says:
13 Dec, 2012 12:26 PM

cool wish theres more *laughing evilly*

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Fallen_Angels_Cant_fly says:
19 Dec, 2012 11:50 PM

i feel like i could just go up to some one i absolutly hate and push them out a window....

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Qasya Gravestone says:
22 Aug, 2013 03:37 PM

I just love it to watch people suffer from my hatred and sadness. I'd be glad to end their life with some sort of cruelty and violence. They do deserve an eminent death.

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daydeon baron-galbavi says:
28 Apr, 2014 05:49 PM

whats wrong with you people

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demonica says:
31 May, 2014 06:44 AM

that was amazing and i love it ive read it tons of times over and over just because i like that well and it amusing to with all the details. brilliantly done. 10 out of 10. Great job. write more.

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Nerezza Selve says:
03 Jun, 2014 05:54 PM

Amazing. Funny, sociopaths generally make the best characters. Good ending.

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Nina says:
12 Aug, 2014 11:32 AM

Amazing story it would be better if it was longer

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Dailyreaper says:
11 May, 2015 02:42 AM

Great story!!!! One of the best short stories I've ever read. Would love to read some more ^_^

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yasmine says:
26 Jan, 2016 07:58 PM

Wow! It was like I was there watching the entire thing happen. It was incredible and is definitely one of my most favorite stories without a doubt!

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Jeff says:
14 Sep, 2016 09:09 PM

OMG love this story so gory....

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Jeff says:
14 Sep, 2016 09:10 PM

I almost fainted reading this!

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Matthew Anderson says:
08 Mar, 2017 07:41 PM

Loved it!!!

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