No Going Back


20 Jun, 2012 09:42 PM
Dim the lights,
And leave me to be,
Blow out the candles,
So I can’t see.

With full strength, I dig in,
No holding back,
I can hear the surface of my skin,
As it starts to crack.

I feel something warm,
In this sea of cold,
Fear is no option,
For now, I have to be bold.

There's no turning back,
I’m going all out,
Not sure what I’m cutting at,
But my release is what its all about.

My breath starts to weaken,
As I feel this sensation,
My eyes start to flutter,
Once they close, they’ll never open.

I fall to the ground,
Its getting harder to breathe,
I see darkness and more darkness,
I guess its finally time to leave.
Tags: Dark, Death, Release
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melissa says:
08 May, 2013 01:54 AM

this is amazing

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XxMetztlixX says:
07 Oct, 2014 07:23 PM

Amazing with your permission i would like to add this to my poetry's club poems of honor list this is deep and amazing so please could i show my club this poem

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Longlivetheing says:
16 Dec, 2016 10:38 PM

yasmin..can't make your own or what? sorry..its just this is another persons feelings describe yours!

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