Kill Me

XxBlackRosexX

19 Jun, 2012 11:44 PM
Tear out my guts, 
Smash in my brain, 
Claw out my heart, 
But don't leave a stain. 

Break all my bones, 
Rip all my veins, 
Drink all my blood, 
Give me more pain. 

Slice me to shreds, 
Drown out my cries, 
Stab all my wounds, 
And watch while I die. 

Freeze all my arteries, 
Burn all of my skin, 
Cut out my tongue, 
Deepen your sin. 

Carve into my flesh, 
Flood both my lungs, 
Pick out my eyes, 
Now go load your guns. 

Shoot at my skull, 
Fracture my ribs, 
Dissect my spine, 
Mutilate my lips. 

Hack at my neck, 
Dislocate my hands, 
Pull out my fingernails, 
Scatter them across the lands. 

Shove me in the furnace, 
Cover the crime, 
Kill me again, 
In another lifetime.
Tags: Death, Blood, Pain
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strawberries:* says:
19 Jul, 2012 02:29 AM

man ! i love this poem ! >:D the 1st Dark poem i liked && loved ! ^^D kep writing ! ^^

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mello says:
10 Jul, 2013 11:47 AM

this was the first poem i really loved but where's black rose ??? >_<

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XxBlackRosexX says:
12 Jul, 2013 12:04 AM

@mello: Sorry, i've been out for awhile...

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catherine says:
26 Jul, 2013 04:11 PM

I love this poem it so wonderful!!!

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mattyM says:
16 Aug, 2013 05:40 PM

gash! it's so dark and beautiful > < i love it!!

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Shaylee says:
07 Apr, 2014 09:47 PM

This poem is beautiful, and i really hope thats not creepy or evil. lol its really good. good job (:

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nick says:
13 May, 2014 07:10 PM

i really love this poem. everytime I read it , it seems to get better and better!!!!11

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yasmine says:
20 May, 2014 06:32 PM

i love this poem i've been trying to write a poem called kill me and you have done something amazing! do you mind if i borrow your poem i want to read it to my poetry group

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Pride Ed says:
28 May, 2014 06:24 AM

That ending. WOW! An excellent rhyme scheme as well.
Nicely done!

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Death-Demon says:
01 Apr, 2015 12:05 AM

That's the way I would like to be killed

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Issy! says:
11 Apr, 2015 03:55 PM

I absolutely adore this poem,every time I read it and I fall in love over and over again.

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Death-Demon says:
14 May, 2015 11:36 PM

that's how I want to be killed by one person

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Franchesca Mia Reves Tortoza says:
08 Apr, 2017 05:39 AM

I love this poem, and the style you used!! But. . . I hope you aren't really trying to get killed. . .

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