Hell

Shadow Skyhawk

30 Apr, 2013 10:33 PM
Hell
I wake up 
I feel hot 
My body is burning
Suddenly I am being twisted in a knot

This is excruciating
I cry out in pain
No one can hear
Over the sound of the blood rain

I am then taken
To a small room
They tie me down
Onto a loom

My body is stretched
I am pulled apart
Someone walks up 
And rips out my heart

I try to scream
But it is no use
I can’t take anymore
Of this horrible abuse

As I sit,
Tied to the loom
All I can think about
Is my impending doom

A man enters the room
With a horrible smell
He walks up to me and says
"Welcome to Hell"
Tags: Hell, Pain, Torture
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anne says:
04 Jun, 2013 07:17 PM

this is just...amazing

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Kevin says:
24 Jun, 2013 06:13 AM

this is an awesome poem!!!

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anne says:
27 Jun, 2013 08:39 PM

I agree with you- !!!

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Harry says:
05 Jul, 2013 04:57 PM

Wow, what a terrific poem!! It's quite sentimental to one that has experienced the physical torture and the agony.
I like it :)

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XxMetztlixX says:
17 Oct, 2014 07:09 PM

terrific poem very describing and gruesome i love it i would give it 5 out of 5 stars nice

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GothicEmbracerKD says:
26 Oct, 2014 02:15 AM

i was really blowned by this poem...!!

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Demon says:
08 May, 2015 06:41 PM

I love your poems

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