Shadow Skyhawk30 Apr, 2013 10:33 PM
Hell I wake up I feel hot My body is burning Suddenly I am being twisted in a knot This is excruciating I cry out in pain No one can hear Over the sound of the blood rain I am then taken To a small room They tie me down Onto a loom My body is stretched I am pulled apart Someone walks up And rips out my heart I try to scream But it is no use I can’t take anymore Of this horrible abuse As I sit, Tied to the loom All I can think about Is my impending doom A man enters the room With a horrible smell He walks up to me and says "Welcome to Hell"
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04 Jun, 2013 07:17 PM
this is just...amazing
24 Jun, 2013 06:13 AM
this is an awesome poem!!!
27 Jun, 2013 08:39 PM
I agree with you- !!!
05 Jul, 2013 04:57 PM
Wow, what a terrific poem!! It's quite sentimental to one that has experienced the physical torture and the agony.
I like it :)
17 Oct, 2014 07:09 PM
terrific poem very describing and gruesome i love it i would give it 5 out of 5 stars nice
26 Oct, 2014 02:15 AM
i was really blowned by this poem...!!
08 May, 2015 06:41 PM
I love your poems