The one that...

Raven Wolff

23 Oct, 2012 10:33 PM
Take my hand,
Drips of tears.
Lead me out of here.
Fear,
everywhere.

Tears continue to pour.
I start to fade away.
What was once Bright,
quickly turns Black.
My heart?
Beaten.
My eye?
Burn with tears.
My wrist?
What wrist?

My hope is gone,
done with.
It left when you did.
Now I'm waiting.
Waiting on something that will never come
someone who will never show.

slowly dying.
Slowly fading.
Bright goes to dark.
Light to black.
Happy to dead.
Smile to frown.

Me to nothing.
You to..
The one that killed me.
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sarah says:
06 Dec, 2012 03:23 PM

i love this site it describes how i feel inside

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Ryan says:
13 Jan, 2013 09:21 PM

I love all of your poems they tell me how i feel in such a beautiful way.

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Max says:
02 Mar, 2013 10:27 PM

..im not much of a poem's kind of guy but..your poems are amazing..keep up the good work...

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catherine says:
09 Apr, 2013 10:13 PM

beautiful...simply beautiful!!

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alyssa hill says:
18 Apr, 2013 12:24 PM

i love this it is so good

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anne says:
25 May, 2013 09:45 PM

awesome? scary? brilliant! i say yes to all of them...i think this poems explains alot of feelings that im to scared to face

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kat says:
04 Oct, 2013 06:01 AM

i feel really good when i read these poems i also write them down in a note book to remind me tat i have something to live for but not really because to tell u the truth i use to cut my wrist too

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Yami_Utushiki says:
04 Oct, 2013 06:19 PM

This poem is amazing!

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demon girl says:
17 Oct, 2013 05:00 PM

raven don't feel alone ive been bulled all my life an im still getin bulled so yeah ur cool bro I love the poem

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lord of lycans says:
12 Nov, 2013 06:22 PM

beautiful

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Jasmine says:
27 Mar, 2014 05:26 PM

Sitting here reading these while listening to stone sour and its making me have tears

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Darkheartmagic says:
22 Apr, 2014 06:29 AM

Great poem I enjoy your style of writing. I'm new to this site and maybe you can help me out. How would I be able to get on my profile of follow poets?

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vanshika chauhan says:
12 Nov, 2014 02:50 PM

A good good read....simple and yet so so...unfolding and difficult at the same time...the ending is fabulous.....

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Robert SIngleton says:
04 Dec, 2014 03:07 AM

damn its so true right now about me and what im going though in life i just got walked out on and my son ripped away from me its insane ... lost and confused ...

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Rchirex says:
19 Dec, 2014 05:56 AM

Amazing ... You describe it pretty well ...

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Death says:
07 Apr, 2015 12:57 PM

Really cool. Where do you get the creativity for it???

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Demon says:
08 May, 2015 03:20 AM

I love all the poems and I also love darkness

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death says:
11 May, 2015 04:13 PM

that's how I'm dying and feeling right now

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Aishwarya Srivastava says:
14 May, 2015 12:29 PM

Amazing..

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Bella Wali says:
02 Jun, 2015 04:52 PM

Simply wOw <3

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Rachell Untalan says:
02 Aug, 2015 05:52 AM

I'm in awe with this site!! It tells my untold story. <3

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Dillon (Blood Tears) says:
22 Oct, 2015 03:43 AM

I have read this again and again since I joined this site. Beautiful, I love it and I love you.

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katt says:
03 May, 2016 04:31 PM

Honestly I love this, I love all the poems. I think it is perfect that all of you are expressing what you feel. Seriously lets be honest though the people that make rude comments are just taking time out of their pathetic life to think about you. so love this with passion. Keep writing poems I love them!!

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Emma Troop says:
08 Jun, 2016 01:57 PM

I cut my wrists to this poem, it's so beautiful. Makes my suicide attempts a lot easier... much like Sylvia Plath, I stick my head in an oven, much like a raven, I'm black inside.

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Kelly says:
20 Jun, 2016 04:39 PM

That was beautiful it makes my pain fell a lot essayer to deal with and life as well. I don't know much about poems but i understand what u go through.I can't fell anything but pain and i'm already faded into the darkness.

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Aishwarya Srivastava says:
12 Jul, 2016 11:52 AM

So moving awesome

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James says:
23 May, 2017 02:27 AM

I always cry reading poems on here. Firstly because they describe how I feel in such a lovely way, which I could never do myself. And secondly because others are suffering too, and I don't know if they're okay now

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