Suicide emotions


18 Jan, 2013 05:28 PM
My mind is in a wide twist
I cut my arm with a razor
Watching blood pour down my wrist
My eyes burn for a savior

Emotions fill up inside
Reminding me I’m close to death
There’s nowhere to hide
So I shall take my last breath

I cry for my life to end
My heart is in pain
Everything’s is not okay so I can’t pretend
There’s no way to save me again
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larry jones says:
07 Feb, 2013 08:17 PM

very deep,truthful & at the same time artistic in reality.

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Quinn says:
11 May, 2013 05:21 AM

I love how it's so short, and simple, and raw. Like death. Wonderful symbolism.

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anne says:
23 May, 2013 03:12 PM

amazing mental pictures without much description, deep, dark and wonderful.

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XxMetztlixX says:
07 Oct, 2014 07:18 PM

Amazing poem do you mind if i use this poem for my poetry club

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michele says:
02 Oct, 2015 03:17 PM

feel you...

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Longlivetheing says:
16 Dec, 2016 10:35 PM

I loved the way you mentioned such a part in life in short descriptive words.

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